Wednesday, 8 February 2017

The Most Influential People in My Life

The most influential people in my life are my parents. My Dad and Mom have many very fantastic talents and qualities. My dad is really good at teaching useful skills like fixing and building. My favorite thing about how my Dad teaches is that he doesn’t just tell me something, he makes sure that I understand what he is saying and he usually gives me a chance to do the things he’s teaching me. My Mom is good at helping me in areas that I don’t understand like certain concepts in school. What I most appreciate about my Moms teaching is that she is very detailed in what she wants improvement on and the result is usually very good. I feel inspired when I am around them and especially when they are teaching me. I really like how sometimes when I’m being taught a skill, my Mom or Dad will make a mistake and then we both learn from it and do much better next time. Mistakes are not always a bad thing sometimes you can achieve success better if you have seen failure. My parents always inspire and encourage me and that is why they are the most influential people in my life.


3 comments:

  1. This is a really good essay! It sounds like you have a great relationship with your parents, and that's wonderful!

    Do watch for run-on sentences...sentences where there should be either a comma with a coordinating conjunction or a period and the beginning of a new sentence. If you go back through your essay and read it carefully, I'm sure you can figure out what I'm talking about. :)

    Keep up the excellent work! I'm enjoying reading your essays!

    Kaliste Fish

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